Monday, July 25, 2011

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This past week was the midterm presentation, and I got some useful feedback from my peers.

– Look into making an augmented reality app.
– Research electronic devices made especially for children to learn a specific task.
The use of humor was well received and much appreciated. 
– In my hypothesis, it should include the word negative.  
  ORIGINAL: It was hypothesized that if information about the impact of children using electronic devices was   
                  readily available, and clearly visible to parents, they would be less likely to allow their children to 
                  use them so freely.
  REVISED: It was hypothesized that if information about the negative impacts of children using electronic   
                devices was readily available, and clearly visible to parents, they would be less likely to allow their 
                children to use them so freely.





 

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